April 28th, 2008, 4:03 pm - Chapter 2 - Page 02



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DAJB, April 29th, 2008, 6:33 am ( Reply )

Response @ smeagol: Heh - the idea of the banter here was to paint Doug as typical of the British WW2 officer class - straight out of a 1940s B&W movie. We start building up extra layers of depth to his character later but, as somewhere to start that readers could immediately identify with, I think this section serves its purpose. And besides it was "jolly good fun" to write!



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